Calling all artsy-fartsy types!

Would one of you mind scotching up a better rendition of an icon like this?
I was thinking chalk outline with my prosaic, yet subtle text...
but as you can see, my attempt? Not so good.

I can only be a genius with so many things at once. Woe is me.

ETA: Okay, this one's a little better...



...but I dunno. J. Bananers? Lil' help here?